Monday 31 October 2016

Using description in the introduction to hook the reader in

Rainbows End
                       
What was that tall electric tube? Wow that  is a really big queue. Then I questioned myself will I go on that extremely giant ride? Hmmm, Avish! My brother called me we decided to do to the Go Cart. Boy was that queue long. When it was finally me and my brothers turn we were like pure enemies rushing to get our tanks. 

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